Heart'n'Soul
Wednesday, October 1, 2008
Hmmmmm
Electrodes firing away,
Thoughts galore, myriad...
No tire to stop it,
No weariness to fade...
Unstoppable is it?
Query myself I...
Unnerving it is but,
My emotions belie...
Going through these motions,
These pangs of introspect...
Making me look back,
Reverie, retrospect...
Etched, pictorial memories,
& those uncapturable moments at play...
Rewind / fast fwd in my head,
& dusk dawns on another day.
Thoughts galore, myriad...
No tire to stop it,
No weariness to fade...
Unstoppable is it?
Query myself I...
Unnerving it is but,
My emotions belie...
Going through these motions,
These pangs of introspect...
Making me look back,
Reverie, retrospect...
Etched, pictorial memories,
& those uncapturable moments at play...
Rewind / fast fwd in my head,
& dusk dawns on another day.
PS: this is Guest Post… my dear friend AJ has written this one and would like you to suggest a nice Title for this one. And well, the winner shall be posted along with my next post… This is his first blog post ever and I am already lurrrrving it!!! Send in your comments and AJ says he will reply to it :)
Labels: contest, introspect, Life, memories, think
44 Comments:
Wow!
Nicely Done AJ
Introspection and looking back brings out so many memories, happy - sad, fun - painful. Its like opening a pandora's box for me.
Really liked it, keep posting :-)
AJ got talent..
read twice...
title - cobweb of thoughts..!!
??
:)
Hi AJ,
Nice first post... its something that we all do now and then :)
what to name it??? - with your verse and pic - how about - RAYS OF LIFE.
Have a nice day mate...
Hi Div...
Take care mate... have a lovely day... cheers...
AJ Dude - this is gooooooood
perfect words I must say, so short n yet so effective...
I suggest - The Seeking Self
D - is this AJ@SIBM?
@Sim, Vinu, Arv, Attaboy - thnks guys for your contri...shall tell AJ
@Arv- m good man, how u... hows the US of A treatin ya? Shll catch ya online soon
@Attaboy - yes he is AJ@SIBM :-)
"jaane kaha gaye woh din"
"I live, I learn..I Seek, I Yearn.."
What an excellent composition from ur mate!
title:
Cellular Album
Keshi.
Some pieces neednt have a title.
And this is way too abstract and wide arrayed to be bound into a title. This is what I feel.
Nice.
a lot of thought into it...writing surely is the way to get the emotions out...it gives us a sense of peace.... time moves and as a leaf in the river,we encounter many things...
Ah its Beautiful!
first time here and look what i found :-)... Shall look forward to more posts by you AJ
And Mini Mini Mouse, i loved Poo Pee Training, I havent stopped laughin since... ROFL
hey that's a mind blowing poem I wanted to write something like this from a very long time ..though my 1st poem was called 'Introspection' but i have been tempted to write something related with introspection and retrospection and I had a title made for it and I am suggesting u the same
'Introspection blending Retrospection' ---hows that ?
Nice abstract work!I feel the same about the title like Cindy :)
Lol,so this was what the sms was about :P
its really nice poem, I like it very much. I couldnt find a suitable title for it.....ask ur freind to start bloggig..
it just a FRACTIONS of thoughts
AJ – its cool yaar!
My fav lines:
“No weariness to fade...
Unstoppable is it?
Query myself I...”
Div, you should also enriched your friends' blog with your guest posts.
Cheers!
awesome...
lovely 1st post!!!
title...hmmm...how abt "whirlwind of life"...
Niiice... Abstract, and thought provoking.
Title: Ruminations...
gr8 start AJ... looking fwd to more from u :)
Static Confusion! :D
That is the title I think! :D
I loved the lines, it is a refreshing change from all the stuff I normally read. Also, my blog has been updated. I'm off for quite a bit. I'll miss ya...
*hugs*
tell Aj well written :-)
well ur frend shud start a blog of his own i think
it was a great effort!
I can't say how much I liked it it was simply lovely
title...Introspect ...A Tryst With Past
hun come check out my posing frenzy lol!
Keshi.
I will go with "memories winded" with the sunset pic and your memories winded.
good poem...he seems to have taken off on quite a flight...you got a mouth ful of contributions for the title...heres mine...
"train of thought OR electrolysis of the mind".
Scribblers Inc.
P.S.-make me win!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeej!! :D
visit me at http://smilestearslife.blogspot.com/
new blog!!
Well written...do pass on my comments to AJ
Title Web of thoughts
hi all.. Thanks a $$$ for the response.. phew! was really overwhelming! :) might just take up bloggin u kno.. so watch out fr this space!! ;)
@Simi : tru.. pandora's box it is.. but its realy heartening aint it to keep goin back..? kinda lik your security blanket..
@vishesh : well put! couldn't agree more
@venkat : poetic! wat u say..
@Shruti b,roy,s,rakesh,gunj.. thx a lot!
@Vinz,Arv,Attaboy,hobo,keshi,peter,roo-ba-roo,pooja,kartz,anindita,priya joyce,priya,scribblers inc,rajesh..
thx fr participating and coming up with so many awesome titles.. winner's announced below :
but before dat.. thx to mini mouse fr running this in her blog.. muahz girl!!!
okay, so here goes..
AND THE WINNER IS>>> CINDERELLA!!!
who suggested that this rather remain untitled..
So there u go.. quite da anti-climax huh ;) hope u guys aint bummed..
thx again n tc!!!! :D
u wanted a title for something thats now gonna remain untitled? hmmmm....Im gonna sue ya for making us think on a title then! lol!
Keshi.
"love is the one who masters all things."
Mawlãnã Rumi...for you.
...no weariness to fade...nustoppable is it?...good good poem!...thank.
I like your poem in the Nave!...YES?
Hah!! I knew it. I was thinking, wow you too became a poet? Now, what's this? even poets start losing their value... LOL
For the title...
electrodes?? Physics..
tire?? vehicle...
rewind?? Casette..
well, I can come up with.....
Nothing
:)
How about "looking back"?
"..& those uncapturable moments at play..."
Abso luvd dis line!
and well, the title.. how bout 'Almost-a-Poem!'
nice one... i smhow dont agree with AJ for agreeing with cindy ;)
to me this poem is a great effort being the first by AJ... but as a piece of poetry in itself, i found it much average and i didn't enjoy it. except for the truly beautiful last line (...and dusk dawns on another day) to me the rest of the poem comes across as a set of random rhyming words sewn together for the sake of making a poem...
those were my first thots.
however... plz dont let my words discourage you..
cheers.. and DO write more!
Twilight...
Needless to say..absolutely loved it,dearie!
Really beautiful!
Excellent inspiration. Brilliant. I love it!
Congratulatons.
Have a nice week.
Damn you talented people.. :p ...LOL..
Well this is just brilliant....looking more from you bro...
@Div..oye..I tagged you yaar.. :)
and how are you..??
A Mindless short-circuit. Thats what i cud think of.Lovely though.Well Munnaben has introduced a gem.Kudos to u AJ and to her.Hehe carry on....
nice post..
Damn neat a work!
And very sweet of you to promote it such :)
So when does AJ start blogging?
AJ - thnks a ton for your contribution... not just me but so many ppl lookin fwd to ur nxt one :)
@To all - thnks for comin by and readin the poem... shall convery your messages to AJ
and from my side, well ....sorry guys caught up in family affairs n never ending work... shall be back asap n for now will complete all my tags :)
This is indeed a some great work... u shud definetly write more and publish it formally
Looking forward to more from u AJ
So whens the next update comin from AJ?
AJ in d dsapprin act? Lukin fwd 2 sue mor gud wrk... wish u a happy diwali!!
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