Heart'n'Soul

Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Hmmmmm


Electrodes firing away,
Thoughts galore, myriad...
No tire to stop it,
No weariness to fade...
Unstoppable is it?
Query myself I...
Unnerving it is but,
My emotions belie...
Going through these motions,
These pangs of introspect...
Making me look back,
Reverie, retrospect...
Etched, pictorial memories,
& those uncapturable moments at play...
Rewind / fast fwd in my head,
& dusk dawns on another day.

PS: this is Guest Post… my dear friend AJ has written this one and would like you to suggest a nice Title for this one. And well, the winner shall be posted along with my next post… This is his first blog post ever and I am already lurrrrving it!!! Send in your comments and AJ says he will reply to it :)

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posted by Heart'n'Soul at 12:21 AM

44 Comments:

Wow!

Nicely Done AJ

Introspection and looking back brings out so many memories, happy - sad, fun - painful. Its like opening a pandora's box for me.

Really liked it, keep posting :-)

October 1, 2008 at 12:37 AM  

AJ got talent..
read twice...

title - cobweb of thoughts..!!
??

:)

October 1, 2008 at 1:34 AM  

Hi AJ,

Nice first post... its something that we all do now and then :)

what to name it??? - with your verse and pic - how about - RAYS OF LIFE.

Have a nice day mate...

Hi Div...

Take care mate... have a lovely day... cheers...

October 1, 2008 at 6:43 AM  

AJ Dude - this is gooooooood

perfect words I must say, so short n yet so effective...

I suggest - The Seeking Self

D - is this AJ@SIBM?

October 1, 2008 at 10:14 AM  

@Sim, Vinu, Arv, Attaboy - thnks guys for your contri...shall tell AJ

@Arv- m good man, how u... hows the US of A treatin ya? Shll catch ya online soon

@Attaboy - yes he is AJ@SIBM :-)

October 1, 2008 at 10:31 AM  

"jaane kaha gaye woh din"

October 1, 2008 at 11:05 AM  

"I live, I learn..I Seek, I Yearn.."

October 1, 2008 at 11:06 AM  

What an excellent composition from ur mate!

title:

Cellular Album


Keshi.

October 1, 2008 at 12:01 PM  

Some pieces neednt have a title.

And this is way too abstract and wide arrayed to be bound into a title. This is what I feel.

Nice.

October 1, 2008 at 12:09 PM  

a lot of thought into it...writing surely is the way to get the emotions out...it gives us a sense of peace.... time moves and as a leaf in the river,we encounter many things...

October 1, 2008 at 1:25 PM  

Ah its Beautiful!

first time here and look what i found :-)... Shall look forward to more posts by you AJ

And Mini Mini Mouse, i loved Poo Pee Training, I havent stopped laughin since... ROFL

October 1, 2008 at 1:57 PM  

hey that's a mind blowing poem I wanted to write something like this from a very long time ..though my 1st poem was called 'Introspection' but i have been tempted to write something related with introspection and retrospection and I had a title made for it and I am suggesting u the same

'Introspection blending Retrospection' ---hows that ?

October 1, 2008 at 2:59 PM  

Nice abstract work!I feel the same about the title like Cindy :)

Lol,so this was what the sms was about :P

October 1, 2008 at 3:53 PM  

its really nice poem, I like it very much. I couldnt find a suitable title for it.....ask ur freind to start bloggig..

it just a FRACTIONS of thoughts

October 1, 2008 at 4:06 PM  

AJ – its cool yaar!

My fav lines:

“No weariness to fade...
Unstoppable is it?
Query myself I...”

Div, you should also enriched your friends' blog with your guest posts.

Cheers!

October 1, 2008 at 4:16 PM  

awesome...
lovely 1st post!!!

title...hmmm...how abt "whirlwind of life"...

October 1, 2008 at 4:56 PM  

Niiice... Abstract, and thought provoking.

Title: Ruminations...

October 1, 2008 at 6:12 PM  

gr8 start AJ... looking fwd to more from u :)

October 1, 2008 at 8:19 PM  

Static Confusion! :D

That is the title I think! :D

I loved the lines, it is a refreshing change from all the stuff I normally read. Also, my blog has been updated. I'm off for quite a bit. I'll miss ya...


*hugs*

October 1, 2008 at 11:12 PM  

tell Aj well written :-)

October 2, 2008 at 3:39 AM  

well ur frend shud start a blog of his own i think
it was a great effort!

October 2, 2008 at 4:20 AM  

I can't say how much I liked it it was simply lovely

title...Introspect ...A Tryst With Past

October 2, 2008 at 7:23 AM  

hun come check out my posing frenzy lol!

Keshi.

October 2, 2008 at 11:02 AM  

I will go with "memories winded" with the sunset pic and your memories winded.

October 2, 2008 at 12:29 PM  

good poem...he seems to have taken off on quite a flight...you got a mouth ful of contributions for the title...heres mine...

"train of thought OR electrolysis of the mind".

Scribblers Inc.

P.S.-make me win!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeej!! :D

October 2, 2008 at 7:00 PM  

visit me at http://smilestearslife.blogspot.com/

new blog!!

October 2, 2008 at 7:02 PM  

Well written...do pass on my comments to AJ

Title Web of thoughts

October 2, 2008 at 7:27 PM  

hi all.. Thanks a $$$ for the response.. phew! was really overwhelming! :) might just take up bloggin u kno.. so watch out fr this space!! ;)

@Simi : tru.. pandora's box it is.. but its realy heartening aint it to keep goin back..? kinda lik your security blanket..

@vishesh : well put! couldn't agree more

@venkat : poetic! wat u say..

@Shruti b,roy,s,rakesh,gunj.. thx a lot!

@Vinz,Arv,Attaboy,hobo,keshi,peter,roo-ba-roo,pooja,kartz,anindita,priya joyce,priya,scribblers inc,rajesh..
thx fr participating and coming up with so many awesome titles.. winner's announced below :

but before dat.. thx to mini mouse fr running this in her blog.. muahz girl!!!

okay, so here goes..
AND THE WINNER IS>>> CINDERELLA!!!
who suggested that this rather remain untitled..

So there u go.. quite da anti-climax huh ;) hope u guys aint bummed..

thx again n tc!!!! :D

October 2, 2008 at 11:58 PM  

u wanted a title for something thats now gonna remain untitled? hmmmm....Im gonna sue ya for making us think on a title then! lol!

Keshi.

October 3, 2008 at 10:06 AM  

"love is the one who masters all things."

Mawlãnã Rumi...for you.

...no weariness to fade...nustoppable is it?...good good poem!...thank.
I like your poem in the Nave!...YES?

October 3, 2008 at 11:50 AM  

Hah!! I knew it. I was thinking, wow you too became a poet? Now, what's this? even poets start losing their value... LOL

For the title...

electrodes?? Physics..
tire?? vehicle...
rewind?? Casette..

well, I can come up with.....
Nothing
:)

How about "looking back"?

October 3, 2008 at 2:21 PM  

"..& those uncapturable moments at play..."

Abso luvd dis line!

and well, the title.. how bout 'Almost-a-Poem!'

October 3, 2008 at 9:50 PM  

nice one... i smhow dont agree with AJ for agreeing with cindy ;)

to me this poem is a great effort being the first by AJ... but as a piece of poetry in itself, i found it much average and i didn't enjoy it. except for the truly beautiful last line (...and dusk dawns on another day) to me the rest of the poem comes across as a set of random rhyming words sewn together for the sake of making a poem...

those were my first thots.

however... plz dont let my words discourage you..

cheers.. and DO write more!

October 4, 2008 at 9:28 AM  

Twilight...

October 4, 2008 at 9:55 AM  

Needless to say..absolutely loved it,dearie!

October 4, 2008 at 7:56 PM  

Really beautiful!
Excellent inspiration. Brilliant. I love it!
Congratulatons.
Have a nice week.

October 6, 2008 at 4:29 PM  

Damn you talented people.. :p ...LOL..

Well this is just brilliant....looking more from you bro...


@Div..oye..I tagged you yaar.. :)
and how are you..??

October 6, 2008 at 10:15 PM  

A Mindless short-circuit. Thats what i cud think of.Lovely though.Well Munnaben has introduced a gem.Kudos to u AJ and to her.Hehe carry on....

October 7, 2008 at 12:58 AM  

nice post..

October 7, 2008 at 11:06 AM  

Damn neat a work!

And very sweet of you to promote it such :)

So when does AJ start blogging?

October 7, 2008 at 1:27 PM  

AJ - thnks a ton for your contribution... not just me but so many ppl lookin fwd to ur nxt one :)

@To all - thnks for comin by and readin the poem... shall convery your messages to AJ

and from my side, well ....sorry guys caught up in family affairs n never ending work... shall be back asap n for now will complete all my tags :)

October 8, 2008 at 2:58 PM  

This is indeed a some great work... u shud definetly write more and publish it formally

Looking forward to more from u AJ

October 16, 2008 at 10:55 PM  

So whens the next update comin from AJ?

October 17, 2008 at 1:15 AM  

AJ in d dsapprin act? Lukin fwd 2 sue mor gud wrk... wish u a happy diwali!!

October 25, 2008 at 3:54 PM  

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